Monday, October 4, 2010

Dog Star QuickWrite


Dog Star Quick Write.
Uncorrected One:
Yes, I have been in a special relationship with a dog before. People love their pet because the pets also have feelings. For lonely people, pets are like brothers, it seems as if they are knowing what he/she is talking about. They also can play with you and make you feel loved. Pets can be something you can talk to or something you can hug. Once you have one, it is part of your life to take care of them and love them. Ever since I moved to Taiwan, my beloved dog left me to live somewhere else. I miss his soapy smell and waggy tail. His eyes tat sparkle when I feed him that say, "Thanks, Bro" or "I love you". Pets is almost like humans, once they vanish, they have taken a piece of life from you.
Corrected One:
Yes, I have been in a special relationship with a dog before. People love their pet because the pets also have feelings. For lonely people, pets are like brothers, it seems as if they are knowing what he/she is talking about. They also can play with you and make you feel loved. Pets can be someone you can talk to orsomeone you can hug. Once you have one, it is part of your life to take care of them and love them. Ever since I moved to Taiwan, my beloved dog had to live somewhere else. I miss his soapy smell and waggy tail. His eyes tat sparkle when I feed him that say, "Thanks, Bro" or "I love you". Pets are almost like humans, once they vanish, they have taken a piece of life from you.


I just posted this on right now, Mr.Dahl. I just noticed that pages don't appear to other people looking at my blog. 

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