Villain Quick Write.
Uncorrected One:
Darth Vader is a villain I like the most. He is evil, blood-thirsty, not merciful , and very persuasive. In the fourth episode, he killed many of his own soldiers for making the slightest mistake. He almost killed his own son and almost turned him to the "Dark Side". Darth Vader fascinates me, because he turned to the Dark Side because he had a dream that his wife was going to die. He also fascinates me because h also survived being burned in lava. Darth Vader is made up of all the villain's traits. He is terrifying, tall, strong, evil, and very ugly. Darth Vader also killed a lot of innocent tribes and relatives. This lack of mercy is what makes a villain a true villain.
Corrected One:
Darth Vader is the villain I like the most. He is evil, blood-thirsty, unmerciful , and very persuasive. In the fourth episode, he killed many of his own soldiers for making the slightest mistake. He almost killed his own son and nearly turned him to the "Dark Side". Darth Vader fascinates me for he turned to the Dark Side because he had a dream that his wife was going to die. He also fascinates me because he also survived being burned in lava. Darth Vader is made up of all the villain's traits. He is terrifying, tall, strong, evil, and very ugly. Darth Vader also killed a lot of innocent creatures like the Ewoks.. This lack of mercy is what makes a villain a true villain.
Dog Star Quick Write.
Uncorrected One:
Yes, I have been in a special relationship with a dog before. People love their pet because the pets also have feelings. For lonely people, pets are like brothers, it seems as if they are knowing what he/she is talking about. They also can play with you and make you feel loved. Pets can be something you can talk to or something you can hug. Once you have one, it is part of your life to take care of them and love them. Ever since I moved to Taiwan, my beloved dog left me to live somewhere else. I miss his soapy smell and waggy tail. His eyes tat sparkle when I feed him that say, "Thanks, Bro" or "I love you". Pets is almost like humans, once they vanish, they have taken a piece of life from you.
Corrected One:
Yes, I have been in a special relationship with a dog before. People love their pet because the pets also have feelings. For lonely people, pets are like brothers, it seems as if they are knowing what he/she is talking about. They also can play with you and make you feel loved. Pets can be someone you can talk to or someone you can hug. Once you have one, it is part of your life to take care of them and love them. Ever since I moved to Taiwan, my beloved dog had to live somewhere else. I miss his soapy smell and waggy tail. His eyes tat sparkle when I feed him that say, "Thanks, Bro" or "I love you". Pets are almost like humans, once they vanish, they have taken a piece of life from you.
